Sunday, 26 April 2009

reply to YQ

Good suggestion for the editing.
I had disscussed with Emilly about the using actor's vioice. We agree always keep the subtitles. For the first scene "Where am I?" makes me feel like his lost at very begain. The feelings at first time when he arrived is very complicated. It includes panic, expectation, full of hope but affraid to be dissapointed. His feeling is full of contradiction, hopeful and helpless.

Concerned about the words he should say, I prefer he introduce himself at first because it's a 5mins short video, every signgle situation and scenes should be directly introduce to the audience. If he keeps saying "where am I" and people couldn't get into his feeling. We need to save the mins.

I still wish the background sounds could focus on the airport sounds and broadcasting sounds at very begining, then it's Cheng's voice. (these are all in black screen)

"I'm Cheng. From China. I am arrived at Sydney, and ......I am alone. I wish I can do great jobs at Australia, can't I?"


For the suicide
Good thinking. And i have a quesion. If we do the montage style before he die, do we need to flashback for the whole thing to the time when he sees the poster again?????
I hope we not do the flashbacktings two times.

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