my little draft

this is the story what i thought so far.

MCU,
Back, look up the blue sky, plane fly passing,

LA, ECU-->MWS,
Ecu on shoes, go with the luggage, walk far (back)

Black and white colour,

MWS(1st person view)
Walk into the class, sit alone

pan, MCU(1st person view)
Looks around, people gossip, eye contact

MWS (1st person view)
Pairs or groups of people walk passed

ECU,(1st person view)
“Fail” on paper.

……….JOB THEME……..

LS
Walk into ATM(BACK),

ECU(1st person view)
on receipt, No money

MCU,
Look up at the moon, (back)

MS
Walk into the telephone-box (back),

CU(1st person view)
Hold the phone -->hesitate hang off, walk away,

MLS,
Walks, message ring, take out mobile

ECU(1st person view)
Message from girlfriend, break up

MWS,
Walk, pass the poster, not see

………mirror talking……

LS,
Running out of lift

LA(1st person view)
Look up the stairs, running,

MS(1st person view)
Close the door, went down, breath,

CU (1st person view)
Hold the pill bottle, fall down on the bed,

MWS(1st person view)
Camera Dizzy, twist,
------------edit transfer between the face expression and the view from eyes, heart beating, deep breath
CU--> ECU,
the eyes,

All back forward
…………to be continued

i had two part need to discuss with you guys. the 1st is the job theme, cuz i've heard different version from everybody. We need a final version for the job theme.

The 2nd is the mirror theme. this part is the climax of the whole story, and it's YQ's idea. I still little confused about the camera techniques, such as how we could make that perfectly.

& i dont have any clues about the last part. the things after the back forward. so, need some ideas.

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